How About Writing A Story Poem by Bharati Nayak

Bharati, such a good write...10+++

And come through my eyes And shine at a corner Like a drop of tear, You know, when they fall They fall like poems, On a blank paper. Beautiful lines dear Apa. Keep up such innovative poems. 10++++ for this new type. Regards SUBHAS

As to clubbed words I thought they were deliberate for an effect and then your poem also said so (They comeand getstruck atmythroat) . Any way the subtlety of the piece is striking. But I may be wrong. This type is not my genre, and as an outsider I can only comment. But I really liked the ending.

p.s. Thanks foraddingthePoet'sNotesasisuggestedthatyoudo! ! ! ha ha. bri :) p.p.s. So, Bharati, how much money have you AND your son made by selling your story? ? ?

(cont.) ...! ! ! MY BRAIN MUST BE ROTTING! ! ha ha (NOT!) i completely forgot i'd read this (maybe not totally forgotten) , and noticed in a comment response from Bharati, as i was looking over the poem comments, that i HAD commented already! ! ! not only THAT, but i'd also said i'd use this poem in my/our March 2018 showcase of poems! ! i did some checking and found it in the showcase, with spaces between words. :) bri

do you mean the title isn't even meant to be clubbed? ? ? i like the title as it is here, but i DID WONDER about much of the rest. i, too, have had such problems, but not so seriously as you seem to have had! ! i suggest that the word you want to use is clumped, BUT maybe PH should be CLUBBED if they are responsible! ! ! (continued) ...

For many days I could not give individual reply to comments.I thought Poem Hunter has changed rules and replied in comment box.Now I find that i can reply individually.Thank you Akhtar Jawadji, Susan Williams, Subhas Chandra Chakra, Seamus O Brian, Madam Geeta Radhakrisna Menon, Bri Edwards, Anil Ku.Panda and Glen Kappy for your encouraging words.