How I Lamented The Emptiness. Poem by Poetic Sky

How I Lamented The Emptiness.

Rating: 5.0


I witnessed the sheer demise of my cohort,
how I lamented the emptiness.
Does emptiness cause you to tremble?
does it?

Scarcity, despite its best efforts,
will always be noticeable.
Does scarcity make you shiver?
does it?

Missing are robust foliage.
and taking heavy toll on our mind.
Always remember the small and insignificant missing.

Wednesday, May 31, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,emptiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 02 June 2023

Ur question is very pertinent, but speaking personally, it does never shiver me.

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Rajan T Renganathan 01 June 2023

Very pertinent question, Does scarcity makes you shiver? Yes it does to everyone.

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Sheeya Hacks 01 June 2023

Emptiness is wonderfully presented here.

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M. Asim Nehal 31 May 2023

Superb poem: I witnessed the sheer demise of my cohort, how I lamented the emptiness.5****

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