How deep my love for you? - Vast oceans deep
Man could not forge a craft to plumb its depths.
How strong my love for you? - T'woulld make men weep
To test its strength and see their strength bereft.
How pure my love for you? - Pure as the snow
Purer in its innocence than you could ever know.
How long my love for you? - Eternity
Beyond the end of time my love remains
How fresh my love for you? - Modernity
A freshness that no flower on Earth attains.
How rich my love for you? - Richer than gold
Pure gold untarnished, never growing old.
Deep, strong and pure my love dear, is sublime
Long, fresh and rich my love, you love entwines.
This love poem is in pseudo- sonnet form. It is in iambic pentameter (5 x 2 = 10 syllables in a line) and an a b a b c c rhyming pattern. It has flow I hope you all enjoy it!
(John Knight - September 2009) .
such a beautiful and heartfelt write, the love within your heart sounds so pure in its own description...great write..10
oh yes, enjoyed the flow and the music....tis romantic! !
Marvellous! ! ! ! This is poetry and not what others try to palm off rantings as poems. I loved this one. Hope one day I can write like you. A+
this is art from your heart and i felt like asking my boy freind 'how much do you love me' LOL I loved this peice. One day i hope to be loved that way that much Beautiful 10++ Lee
A beautiful declaration of love stemming from the heart. Voted.
so this is the second reading for a wonderful so beautiful crafted..loved it, all of it.. How deep my love for you? - Vast oceans deep Man could not forge a craft to plumb its depths. How strong my love for you? - T'woulld make men weep To test its strength and see their strength bereft. How pure my love for you? - Pure as the snow Purer in its innocence than you could ever know. How long my love for you? - Eternity Beyond the end of time my love remains How fresh my love for you? - Modernity A freshness that no flower on Earth attains. How rich my love for you? - Richer than gold Pure gold untarnished, never growing old. Deep, strong and pure my love dear, is sublime Long, fresh and rich my love, you love entwines.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very romantic sir. It is well organized. The choice of rhyming words are better than mine but soon I will learn more rhyming words and make my poems more beautiful. Thanks for the comments sir!