Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,310 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

I Do Not Only Loving You - Poem by Ali Sabry

I do not only loving you
I'm dying on you honey
I'm dying on your romantic love
Only my god know how much I'm loving you from whole my white romantic heart
I'm walking in your air when I am with you
& your opinions sure it's very important for me
For make myself loving you
Whole my thinking only is about you
My brain is busy only for you specially
I do not only loving you
You are my life angel
I wish that I can stay with you in all the time
I wish that I can spend whole my life with you only
Darling you mean to me whole the world
Your love is unlimited
Your loves no have borders
You are my infinity romantic love

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I Do Not Only Loving You

Comments about I Do Not Only Loving You by Ali Sabry

  • Pawan Meena (8/25/2016 10:09:00 AM)

    Deep love (Report) Reply

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  • Tapan M. Saren (3/20/2016 4:07:00 AM)

    Beautiful expression... (Report) Reply

  • Sonali Ganguly (3/19/2016 4:10:00 AM)

    feeling is great....real poetry is like the flow of emotion gushing out straight from heart..... (Report) Reply

  • (2/26/2016 9:17:00 AM)

    you have poured a real feel in this poem seems that you are writing about your real lover (Report) Reply

  • (2/23/2016 12:50:00 AM)

    It is real love, I can see. Love is what, it is a moment your ego comes out of your mind and visible before you. Dear friend, read through internet what great ancient Roman poet, Horace said to his friend's two sons about poetry writing. We all need to follow him badly. (Report) Reply

  • (3/30/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    This is really nice. Very romantic. Keep it up friend :) (Report) Reply

  • Josh Ross (12/15/2012 8:05:00 AM)

    I love your poem its to the heart. (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2012 5:47:00 AM)

    You definitely need to do some reading. May I suggest TS Eliot, Ezra Pound & Hart Crane, if not Stephen Crane for whom I have a special affinity. This poem you wrote really drips with overemotion and too-symbiotic romanticism. I forgive the grammar, however. (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    It needs some work on grammar, but otherwise it's good. (Report) Reply

  • Penky Yumnam (12/5/2012 12:04:00 AM)

    Love is abstract... Its seems like a true love for someone (Report) Reply

  • Shihabudheen K J (11/28/2012 10:14:00 PM)

    Love expressed without boundaries (Report) Reply

  • Shihabudheen K J (11/28/2012 10:12:00 PM)

    Love expressed without boundaries (Report) Reply

  • Dilstefny Dd (11/28/2012 4:50:00 AM)

    Wow superb.I'm fallen in love with your poem. (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2012 5:51:00 AM)

    I guess, the lady will not be able to stop herself in loving you after reading this. I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2012 2:58:00 AM)

    You expressed your feeling the way you understand it. Good Attempt friend (Report) Reply

  • Derek Haughton (11/14/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    I agree with the criticism of your English vooiced by one or two others and i could criticise every line for one reason or another. Forgive me, I have my own work to do, I don't have time to assist you in that. Again this is over-long, repeating itself although the depth of your feeling comes through try to use a little restraint, much of the time 'less is more'. (Report) Reply

    B. Lewis (4/19/2015 7:37:00 PM)

    Then why not get on with your own work rather than making vague criticisms?
    While you are at it, you might want to learn that the first person pronoun in English is spelled with a capital I and how to use Spell-check.
    Would you criticise the poems of E. E. Cummings for his English?
    Maybe his passion requires him to be over-long (like your contribution) or maybe that is his style?

  • (11/10/2012 3:55:00 AM)

    very interesting poem, show your feelings n express them in words (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2012 6:48:00 PM)

    so much of heatfelt love in this poem..I love it (Report) Reply

  • Luann Soares Aranha (11/7/2012 12:59:00 PM)

    great emotions are everywher wow (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2012 3:21:00 AM)

    so much in love.. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 24, 2012

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