~ Enigmatic Navel ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Enigmatic Navel ~

Rating: 4.4


~ ENIGMATIC NAVEL ~
Ms. Nivedita.
UK.21.10.09.

Oi
Why cave navel?
Unveil
Navigate I’ll
Keep not enigmatic.

Your enigmatic navel
A makeshift
From mother fixation
Of neonatehood
To fiancée fixation
Of younghood
Is my visual cuddle.

Put on low waist jeans
Tattoo butterfly around
Decor with diamond
Navel ring jocund.

Dispel
Silhouette sable.

A romantic trespass
To unravel marvel
Of ballet ruffle.

With glib
Glide gait
Navel-gyrate
Will titrate
Alchemy in
Unfolding of
Petals’ rouleau,
A smiling rose bud
On your enigmatic navel!

Coalescing sweat beads
In vermillion of setting sun
Psychedelic color play
In sparkling diamond
Butterflies zoom out
Heart sweetening
Dance on arc of rainbow
Voluptuously flummox me.

My tryst
Your enigmatic navel,
My noetic ride in
Ebullient tunnel!

In sensuous navel
Bedeck floral travel
Babble twaddle tattle
Oho hoo-oo oho hoo-oo
Why not join you too?


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Braja K Sarkar 24 October 2009

Your distinct style of usuing words in a poem, use of metaphor etc certainly will identity you as a poet of new era, dear Niv. I like this poem.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 24 October 2009

Fabulous subjectivization and Ms.Niveditaization diction! LOL Ten++ dr.sakti

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Marvin Brato 24 October 2009

GREAT write, profound expression.

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Raju Baruah 07 March 2010

.....Coalescing sweat beads In vermillion of setting sun Psychedelic color play In sparkling diamond Butterflies zoom out Heart sweetening Dance on arc of rainbow Voluptuously flummox me..... a stunning piece of verse that keeps a reader engaged...entertained...10+

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Surya . 29 March 2010

hi friend, it is indeed very nice and exciting to read this poem on the beauty of navel.the position and shape certainly gives one excitement particularly on gyration in dance sequences.you could be the first one to write a poem admiring.congrats. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 September 2020

psychadelic show of colourful images

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Vipins Puthooran 03 December 2011

In thine poems words are danc'n! Beautiful poem like a beauideal butterfly! ! ! !

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Aminath Neena Haneef 17 April 2011

Very sensual and lovely

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Kevin Carney 06 September 2010

Super, I agree the visuals are fantastic. Loved reading this.

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Will Althen 03 August 2010

Nice word use not really my kind of thing though

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