I Fear Poem by Rini Shibu

I Fear

Rating: 5.0


Will I sink I fear
As I sail on these tears
The whirlpool at the core
May take along my soul
But If drown
I could feel the ripples down
And climb the steps of hope
till I reach the shore, no one can stop

Wednesday, September 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 26 September 2018

This is a very good and inspiring poem especially the part about climbing the steps of hope.

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Naila Rais 26 September 2018

So motivating! Loved it..... We should keep trying...10 Naila

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2022

I tell you Rini, it is Bri Edward who is doing everything! His mask! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2020

I could feel the ripples down And climb the steps of hope till I reach the shore, no one can stop very fine expressions dear Rini.

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Carl Roussell 31 October 2018

Keep on looking to tomorrow - very inspiring poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 September 2018

Hi Rini, A poem depicting the agony and angst of the pain inflicted by life’ vagaries... and exuding confidence that “we shall overcome “. Powerfully rendered....

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Rebecca Navarre 26 September 2018

And climb the steps of hope till I reach the shore, no one can stop All the way through, beautifully moving, beautifully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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