I Feel Betrayed Poem by Bradley Lester

I Feel Betrayed



I feel betrayed the way I loved
And gave my heart away
It's like a slap to stop my stride
To say please walk away
I feel betrayed cos I was true
At least I tried my best
To be a better man to love
And keep up with the rest
But now I know that I have failed
They make me out to be
They've closed the door I feel the cold
The darkness smothers me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

you very consciously select ideas and set them per stanza to kite up the topic, easy to follow all through..nice poem..10++

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Bradley Lester

Bradley Lester

Western Cape, Cape Town
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