I fell so happy today
An inspiring young voice
With a rhythmic flow
Reached in my ear so longed for.
Blushed me as any thing
Danced within the rhythm
Which I cant explore now
The story of that sweet voice
But my duties reminded me
For a sudden stop
Fall from the destiny
Extended to the next day
Mist melted with hope
To hear again
To melt again
And swim in the pool of joy.
Hearing young inspiring voice you feel happy and you make us happy through beauty of expression in this poem. Duties remind life's status. Mist melts hope to get joy by touch of love. Very nice poem is shared here...10
I feel so happy today Sir, Reading your your inspiring comments on my poem- Age extends and speed lessens on my life
It is very important to be happy, and wishing that calm, peaceful happiness for all the time, which mean that we have to work on under\standing others and go along with what ever happens, still keep the calm peace and the happiness. Definitely knowing that everything will be all right, not on our way, but all right in the truth.
Its great that you are happy... I hope your friend calls you again... I love reading your writes. They keep me positive...
I am soooooo happy for your happiness. Just keep it for good. Enjoy life, love everything what is before you and then you will be happy for ever,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
swimming in the pool of joy, good one.