There as searing beauty in the air
You breath. The is viscous tartar
In the teeth I leave.
No one can be wiser than the
Man who has worn it all,
Close to his chest.
I have worn nothing but diffident
Bequests.
So, you are better than all the rest.
No one can be wiser than the Man who has worn it all Close to his chest. This is a great line containing both metaphor, hyperbole and wisdom. Note please, no comma after ‘all’. The second line: could you mean? Your breath. There is viscous tarter Adeline
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I would like to translate this poem
Perfect 10 SG.............poetic licence don't worry about commas..who needs their writing constricted by such things!