I Hate My Life Poem by teanne sneddon

I Hate My Life

Rating: 5.0


i hate my life because of you
of everything you put me through
i loved you and you loved me
we were meant to be
now you don't and
my heart has broke
now the cuts upon my wrist
i count them, how many times you broke my heart
but i guess its my fault
i did you wrong
now i must pay the consequences
with a broken heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hey, I know what it's like to be depressed, and I've felt like it will never get better. I still feel like that sometimes. I think it's really cool the way you let out your emotions, and the word choice, it's all really good. People have told me they like my poems, and sometimes I think it's dumb, cuz I write out of sorrow, so it's like having people say 'I like your depression'. But I can relate to what you say in your poem, even though I'm sorry for what you went through, I think the poem's really good.

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Chance 10 November 2009

nice poem cutting seems to help but in the long run you will regret it i hate my scars and thats what stops me from cutting again and again

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