I Have Found My Rhythm Poem by Bharati Nayak
I Have Found My Rhythm
Wow---
I have found my rhythm
I have escaped from the dungeon
I hold in my hand pure sunlight
From the sky, I pluck the stars
I bring the moon to my earth
My feet have found their hold.
How light they have become
They have shattered the iron chain
Now, my steps dance,
Dance to my own heart
No more they dance to your tunes.
Don't regret
I raise my step,
A step for the sky
I an't aim to break the glass ceiling,
But want to break a new ground.
This is a beautiful poem of courage to finally feel free and yes breath it and make yourself feel good admire thyself and live for another hopeful world. Good poetry.
Excellent poem penned; poem of inspiration // there is true rhythm of life where the freedom lives and plays as its own wish; there is true rhythm of surviving happy life where freedom for every humankind coposes equal rights;
Wow! Those first 6 lines shimmer with excitement and pulled me into dancing down the other lines! ! ! That is artistry, Bharati! ! ! And those 2 closing lines are perfect. Top marks!
Finding rhythm of life through natural perception is a great thing. We have motivated life through greater readings od nature. An excellent poem is well penned.
Thank you all poets for your wonderful comments on this poem.I just discovered so many new comments here.
the rhythm that dances in step with the aspirations of life. Superb
Excellent poem Bharati that deserve much more than 5 stars
A brilliant write madam. I am wondering how did i miss this poem. Nothing less than 5***
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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My Steps Dance! ! ! ! Because of the truth.