Joshua Fegley

Rookie - 5 Points (Just another dying day... / I'm fading away)

I'Ll Die Alone - Poem by Joshua Fegley

Life scars us
Because we're one of the same
But you were different
And now you're the one to blame

People can change
It's all the same
Love and honour to you
Was just a game

You said you'd be there
That you would never go
But unhappy thoughts of us together
Were never letting me grow

Between dissimulated faith and love
And between your open thighs
An epic battle raged on
On a frontline of emotions and lies

You opened your mouth
Another sadistical lie
I had to go the other way
I could no longer try

Distrust and hate is all I ever knew
So forget me not
Because one day...
I'll die alone


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Just another poem on God, life and happiness.

Comments about I'Ll Die Alone by Joshua Fegley

  • Gold Star - 13,468 Points Lyn Paul (3/5/2013 7:55:00 AM)

    I do not think about dying alone it is about being comfortable with death. Thanks Joshua (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 187 Points Rick Adriolo (2/4/2013 2:50:00 PM)

    Exept the fact that everyone dies alone.. very nice poem..10+ and one step.. okay a little step closer to the poem top 500 haha.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shiraz Murray (1/9/2013 10:18:00 AM)

    the flow....great, words...pure. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Butch Dominguez (1/9/2013 4:52:00 AM)

    guess this is how it goes my friend... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alex Deacon (1/7/2013 7:16:00 PM)

    A bitter truth Joshua (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,991 Points Valerie Dohren (1/7/2013 8:10:00 AM)

    I guess most of, us will die alone Joshua - a sad and poignant write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, January 7, 2013


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