I love her yet she doesnt seem to notice
my warm eyes full with her and she doesnt even know
when i touch her arm i know no bounds of joy
and when she laughs my heart leaps from my chest
and to see her upset turns my world to apocolyptic gloom
i love her and yet she doesnt seem to notice.
i do my best to show her a good time
to make her applaud at a funny rhyme
and every day i smile faintly as to a hint
to the fact i love her and still she doesnt seem to notice
i might as well live out my days
living in a stormy haze
because the one girl i wish would care
can only point and laugh and stare
but to me it is as hell should be
to know i love her and she not me.
If words could describe how much that poem decribes me i would say them but i cant, , , , That was a very well written and played poem it came strate from teh heart keep up the good work
ouch i really felt the pain on this one....i give this one a ten..~hazel
Ahh.. I have that trouble. It's doubly galling to watch her light up with limbic delight to some other dude who doesn't really care. I guess if the other dude lit up too it'd be even harder. I could go on but I wont.
So sad, love not returned. You have described these feeling well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Suffering in silence. What a sad state of affairs. Keep the poems coming fella!