I Love You Poem by David Harris

I Love You

Rating: 5.0


I love you is such a simple phrase
that we use all the time
to express our feelings towards one another.
Pledging the feelings that we feel,
hoping all the time they will be returned.

I love you, we shout it
from the bottom our hearts.
Eyes wide open as we advance
through the gates of Eden
and the pleasures that wait there.

We consume ourselves with fire
that would outshine a thousand stars,
when we say to someone special
those three magic words;
I love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 August 2007

David...As all your work is, this too ihas been crafted & delivered with passion & eloquence...Sometimes, i think that phrase is overused, but in the setting you describe here, i will say that it is said...'not nearly enough'! Rock Solid, my friend. Enjoyed the past few days...had some intermission from the grind...got to pen out some new work, and read some of my favorites, such as you.Take Care. ~ ~ ~

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x... x... 22 August 2007

And you and Vera are proof of this. For me, the I LOVE YOU's are for the kids and the babies, for at the moment there is no significant other for reasons of my own.........as always, with your poems, I'm touched. ~~marci.xo.~~

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