Treasure Island


(1993/03/10 / Newcastle, Madaden Hospital)

I'm a star

I may be notorious but i'm a star
my life may look lunatic
my mind may be intricated & fartic
my eyes may have clouds to not see
but my work done would be shown
enemies can try to put me down
but what i know i'm a star

earth it self can say it
sea can show that
i may seen as a crazy guy
and have not money to buy
but my hands has done good work
even though it hard when i look back
but what i know i'm a star
life may be symphathetic
face be fartic
but i'm so pessimistic
and i'm not traumatised
at the same time i'm a fanatic
and what i know i'm a star

life may be a rough road to walk on
but i have to survive on
even if it getting diffused
but haters will be agitated by a star
which is me and i wear all stars
i'm a star
i'm a star and i can repeat i'm a star
that is what i can elaborate i'm a star

Submitted: Monday, April 15, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 03, 2013

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it elaborate the though of what life may be

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