I Promis Poem by kimberley elwell

I Promis

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i promis i will not harm anyone but myself
i promis i will try and stop all the child neglect
i promis i will live a happy and everlasting life
i promis i will do my duty to god
i promis i will help all those who ask for help
i promis i will do what you ask me
i promis i will always be a caring and kind person
i promis i will take care of all those in need
i promis i will never do drugs
i promis i will do my best in every way i possibly can
i promis i will find the right person out there for me
i promis that the world is a better place with out me

by kimberley elwell
the world may be a better place withought me no one likes me i dont belong in this world i belong with all those who had a life but know live up in heavon people treat me like i dont exist its better to die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chip Reed 07 December 2008

people care about you trust me when i say life only gets harder as you grow up and you might just be goin through that im a teenager and noone pays attention to me phase but its just a phase

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Paul Buttigieg 29 November 2008

Kimberley, of course people like you. We certainly do not want you to go from this world....with your talent for writing you will be a valuable listening post for all others who feel a little down at times. Now let me say I like your writing so get busy and write some more Keep your heart open to all things Kimberley everyone has a role to play in this world.especially you

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