I Walk Alone Poem by TP Sage

I Walk Alone

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I walked alone
while you waited.
I watched the sunset.
you anticipated.
I spoke of a love
my actions negated.
you asked for commitment.
I said it's overrated.

because
I thought you were forever.
I thought you were the sky
or the stars,
or the oceans.
but

I left my footprints deep in the sand
And swore to you
one day
I would retrace them
But when I turned around
I found
The tide had erased them.
Now I'll never replace them.

you were the sand.
I walk alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashley Hart 18 March 2008

I love how you compare your love to footprints being washed away in the sand...great poem.

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Coral Gables, Florida
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