What do you think this poem is about?

~i want~

I want to see your face
smiling back at me,

I want to see your face when theres no one else to see,

I want to feel your hug when theres no one else to hold,

I want to feel your lips that make me feel like gold,

I want to hear your voice, truth be told!

Submitted: Thursday, June 12, 2008
Edited: Thursday, June 12, 2008


Comments about this poem (~i want~ by mikaela smith )

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  • Jesse Turner (6/16/2008 7:46:00 PM)

    Good rhyme scheme and cool message. Very nice.

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  • DELETED NOW (6/16/2008 6:34:00 PM)

    very wanting...I like how it all fits together in some strange way.
    I like it.

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  • Brandon Dugan (6/16/2008 1:50:00 PM)

    really cute poem i enjoyed it

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  • Angeline Snowboy (6/14/2008 6:54:00 PM)

    aww
    i like this one =)

    peace out
    angeline-♥

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