I want to tell you how I
feel when you turn away
from my tears
I want to tell you how I
feel when you don't comfort
my fears
I want to tell you how I
feel when I hear you
say mean things
I want to tell you many
things but i won't becasue
you would never understand
Short precise, profound wording from you Mariana, very accomplished piece, Take care sweet-heart Love duncan X
I wanna tell you a story about a young princess call Mariana who write with an exquisite pen and produces wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece my friend. David
I too want to tell you of a lovely lady who puts beautiful words to paper. Words I can certainly relate to. For many years I have not had the courage to express my feelings to a certain individual, I don't want to hurt that person in any way and as time goes on, I realize one day I will have to bury those feelings along with that person. Excellent poem---Melvina---
Isn't poetry such a great outlet for our feelings? Keep writing... this one is great. p.s. reading the title made me think of the beatles' song - 'i want to tell you'. it's a good song, though. thanks :)
This is such a true poem Mariana. I feel like this so much, i have loads to say and ask but i think that its safer for me to keep it bottled up.
I love this one! ! One of my favs from you! I understand the feeling and i can relate, I think thats why i like it so much! I have an x boyfriend who i wannted to tell how he made me feel sometimes and i couldnt because I feared the same thing, that he wouldnt understand. Great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -Meghan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poemo Marianna All the best Roger