Ideal Journey Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Ideal Journey

Rating: 4.5


A richest place on earth
for you ideal journey
where you could bury
all your sins and faults
countless thoughts and unfulfilled dreams
shattered souls of dear departed
leaving the old body and searching
the shadows in dim lights
where GOD'S magical fingers
spin the golden threads
and weave the silken linen
for your last journey on earth
preparing a place for your new start
to leave this world for HIS abode.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
god's welcome to his abode
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 10 July 2016

Hi Saraswathy, A poem too spiritual, and lauding death. Quite unlikely entry from Saraswathy, who always exude confidence and harbour positive thinking, capable of imparting positive energy to the reader.

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oh really, thanks a lot dear poet, being positive and spreading the vibe is the utmost need of the hour, as people are too self centered and materialistic, thanks again dear poet

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Khairul Ahsan 09 July 2016

'preparing a place for your new start to leave this world for HIS abode' - The ultimate journey for the ultimate abode.... Nice poem.

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Yes, one day we all need to start as per destiny, thanks sir for the review

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2016

Preparing a place for a new start! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Welcome, one day we should all be prepared for it, thanks

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