Idk Poem by Ivory Harris

Idk



The older I get the more the world seems like a scarey place.
The more I meet people the more I grow to dis like people.
It seems like I am starting to see the world for what it is and not what I've been told.
In this world u have three chocies you can accept the hand ur dealt, change it or lay down and die.
I refuse to accept it and I am not ready to die.
So the only thng I can do Is change it. With or without the help of thoses that say they love me.
I dont know what the point of this poem is but I felt that it had to be said.
Maybe somebody will get somthing from it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neil Marsden 09 October 2008

Hi Missey, Well in terms of yur objectives with writing this piece then you have exceeded your expectations, I got so, so much from this and can relate entirely to the feelings that you describe with such skill. Thank you so much! Take great care! Neil.

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Ivory Harris

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Chicago but grow up in Fresno, Cali
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