If I Knew New Poem by Susan Lacovara

If I Knew New

Rating: 5.0


If I knew new
To be the best foot forward
Then I to step outside
All reservation
Realizing I have been parked too long
In a 'No Standing Zone'

And if by new
The days counted joyful
True, kind, and to come without a price
That precise moment of my eyes
Meeting yours
hearing stories that have no words
Welled up wishes
Of finding answers to questions the heart
Long ago forgot to ask...
Fear and fault would fall aside
To bramble blown by the wind
And hat, left, to build upon
If I knew new...
And You

Friday, April 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: meeting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(04/22/16) . An Old Soul, seeking New. For D. Who knows where the road ahead leads. To PEACE< if you please.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 April 2016

Loved this stanza... That precise moment of my eyes Meeting yours hearing stories that have no words Welled up wishes Of finding answers to questions the heart Nice poem. A sweet 10 for it. With an invitation for your valuable remarks on my poems and thanking you for this sharing.. Subhas

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Sekharan Pookkat 24 April 2016

wonderful poem seeking answers questions of heart which loves peace

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 April 2016

Fear and fault would fall aside To bramble blown by the wind And hat, left, to build upon If I knew new... And You....... i have parked too long. on a no standing zone...... fine expressions of the past and now the present meeting and the desire to go on.... in life. thank you. dear poetess. tony

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Kelly Kurt 22 April 2016

A wonderfully written piece, Susan

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