If One Day Poem by lilluth amelia grim
If One Day
if one day you feel like crying...call me
I don't promise you that
I will make you laugh
but I can cry with you
if one day you want to runaway
don't be afraid to call me
I don't promise to ask you to stop
but I can runaway with you
if one day you don't want to listen
to anybody just call me
I promise to be very quite
I'm here for you
your shoulder to cry on
me giving you hugs
like sisters and friends forever
I know god made us sisters and friends
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4/26/2024 7:06:24 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Very nice, but as a former English teacher, let me offer some advice to make it better. Runaway is a real word, but only as a noun. Here you should use RUN AWAY (two words) . [In the first and last lines of verse two] Verse three, last line, you meant QUIET, not QUITE. In the last line, please capitalize God. It's a lovely poem. I have voted it a ten.