If You Love Me.... Poem by lozzi drippin

If You Love Me....

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Do not grieve if i am dead,
do not repeat a word i said,
if i cry,
do not feel the want to die.

If you love me do not shove me,
If i lie,
do not feel the need to die,
For i am alone with my acts of crime.

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Emily Oldham 27 September 2008

Interesting...

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Celise Mclean 11 July 2008

um very instresting Lauren, your poem is about death right? and your feelings towards it, you seem to sum up your emotions almost in a commedic way, good try would have been good if it was more in depth though.

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