If You Walk Alone... Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

If You Walk Alone...

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if you follow others
you get the same love or hurt

if you walk alone
you reach great plains as you wish

if you learn to assure
feel than hurting others

if you want to be strong
get smart by the mistakes

if you want support
give the needy helping hands

if you want contentment
you design your life in the ways of god.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
design your life in a righteous way
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Sebastian 02 June 2016

Beautiful poem. Keep writing Saras, the best is yet to come! Great lines: if you want support give the needy helping hands 'Only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile. Paul Sebastian

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Thanks dear sir, I know I just scribblling, yet to be sincere and do justice to my passion, love you take care, pls comment it's the only encouragement fir a budding person like me, welcome dear

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In the ways of God for contentment.True.Nicely done.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 May 2016

Get smart by the mistakes! ! Earth is a learning place. Nice work.

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Mistakes are just chances to reassess, reset, refine and redefine us, thanks

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