M.D DINESH NAIR

(9 -21 / Thrissur (Kerala) / Vijayawada (A.P) , India)

Illusions V/S Withering Me - Poem by M.D DINESH NAIR

I first see a smiling face somewhere
But as I go near to see it close, it fades out.

I then see a caring hand very close
But as I wait for its touch, it too fades out.

I later hear a sweet mouth speaking very near too
But as I begin to heed well, it withers out.

I have illusions perhaps, I think for a while.

I see a frail flock of men and women climbing a hill
Unto a peak of things unknown and unseen.

They have smiling faces and caring hands
And they speak sweet words and dream high.

I have no illusions, I begin to learn.

Down below the plains of eerie silence
I now begin to search for myself partly faded and dead!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Our judgments often go wrong. In real, at times we have to judge ourselves too.

Comments about Illusions V/S Withering Me by M.D DINESH NAIR

  • Silver Star - 3,735 Points Diane Hine (1/20/2013 2:50:00 AM)

    Maybe we need illusions sometimes - I'm not sure. Fascinating poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,289 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/6/2013 8:59:00 PM)

    People are busy with cheering all their life as we do..though the last couplet is full of pain, I enjoyed reading this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 628 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (1/6/2013 8:34:00 AM)

    Have your heart in the right place - you seem to say.The poem is lively and imaginative.So very well written.
    I loved it.! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 6, 2013


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