Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,898 Points (18 October 1964)

My Son


My son, I can see so many good things in you
And here I am really honest and true.
My son, I love it when your caring heart opens wide
When I had a headache you came and sat by my side

My son, some of your talents for drawing, I have seen
You are really good at it, believe me, fantastic, I mean
My son, there are really so many good things in you.
Even so far, I have mentioned just two

My son, you have a talent for language, you do
Yes learning a language is easy for you
My son, Here’s number three, there is so much more
So much more in you, I truly adore

My son, I do understand that being 14 is quite challenging
There are so many things changing
But please my very lovely son,
Keep on bringing out the good that’s in you, please keep on.

Your loving father, Papa


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Submitted: Tuesday, July 19, 2011
Edited: Saturday, May 11, 2013

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  • Freshman - 2,257 Points Paul Sebastian (11/14/2014 8:01:00 AM)

    Great write from a loving father to a faithful son. What a great blessing to have a son who you can praise - right from your heart! Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,257 Points Paul Sebastian (11/14/2014 8:00:00 AM)

    Great write from a loving father to a faithful son. What a great blessing to have a son who you can praise - right from your heart! Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,003 Points Valsa George (9/1/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    An adorable write! The message it gives, supercedes its poetic beauty! Each parent should be able to count one by one and speak aloud before their children their strengths! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Ruby Honeytip (7/7/2013 1:24:00 PM)

    Reinforcing the good is never wrong [3 Even better when it comes from the heart. Lovely words.....love Roobs x (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,467 Points Wahab Abdul (5/24/2013 4:44:00 AM)

    really a good take for your son.. i had a son of 7 years.. i love him very much as you love yrs.. love the poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 561 Points Shahzia Batool (11/19/2012 3:39:00 AM)

    you really have poured forth the soul of a father in all chaste and pure colors of emotions while composing this apostrophe to your son...it's simple though deep and very effective! i hope he must be proud of his status as your son! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,540 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/17/2012 7:17:00 AM)

    Oh so heartwarmin frm father to son! Excellent rhymin too. So sweet sincere as a poem. Make him read it poet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (9/24/2012 10:20:00 PM)

    Your son should be proud to have such a doting father.May the relationship thrive and your young son rise to great heights.My best wishes to father and son.I liked the poem so much.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,070 Points Walterrean Salley (5/29/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem. Just great! A proud Papa expressing boundless love for his dear son. May your bond be inseparable, and your son continues be pleasing to his loving, caring and doting father. My best to you Hans. 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Jinal Oswal (3/28/2012 8:57:00 AM)

    It is so important for a child to have parents who understand them in these changing times where one cannot trust any one... and especially the child needs dad(according to me) ... I love the way you understand him.. appreciate him... he is a lucky boy, indeed Papa's boy... I wish all the parents here read this and understand how important it is to to think about the child in this manner.. Thank you Sir, thank you very much! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Annabel Cruz (2/23/2012 9:37:00 PM)

    There is nothing sweeter and more pure than one's love for one's children. This is truly heartfelt and sincere......I love the honesty of feeling behind it, and isn't that what poetry is all about after all.....you have mastered that! I have several poems on my page about my daughters and they are among my favorites for that very reason....I feel I am at my most sincere and open when I write about them. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,148 Points Elena Sandu (2/23/2012 5:17:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful poem! It shows the struggle of a parent to keep a child on the surface. The challenges of changes are tough not only for kids but also for the parents. Hard to see their battle and not intervene..Wonderful poem thank you for share.26144 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sajna Kailas (1/4/2012 5:09:00 AM)

    You are a very good understanding and caring father.the way you watching the talents and changes of your son is Appreciable and also your tension while he is growing is pictured wonderfully! loved this poem a lotttt! ! ! God Bless You! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Anthony Han (12/28/2011 11:26:00 AM)

    First time seeing a poem dedicated to a family member, this one is wonderful.

    Btw thanks for your support on my two poems you commented on.
    In regards, I ask you try out Poets.org if you ever plan on going towards the next step! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,612 Points Ken E Hall (11/21/2011 2:31:00 AM)

    Nice tribute to your son I can see where he gets his manners from a chip off a good block...regards







    tribute to a loving son (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lenore Lee (9/8/2011 9:07:00 PM)

    This completly moved me. Your son is soooo lucky to have such a caring father (Report) Reply

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