Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 12,357 Points (18 October 1964)

My Son - Poem by Aufie Zophy

My son, I can see so many good things in you
And here I am really honest and true.
My son, I love it when your caring heart opens wide
When I had a headache you came and sat by my side

My son, some of your talents for drawing, I have seen
You are really good at it, believe me, fantastic, I mean
My son, there are really so many good things in you.
Even so far, I have mentioned just two

My son, you have a talent for language, you do
Yes learning a language is easy for you
My son, Here’s number three, there is so much more
So much more in you, I truly adore

My son, I do understand that being 14 is quite challenging
There are so many things changing
But please my very lovely son,
Keep on bringing out the good that’s in you, please keep on.

Your loving father, Papa

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Comments about My Son by Aufie Zophy

  • Raiven Moore Raiven Moore (8/26/2016 2:41:00 AM)

    I have twin boys aged 11 so I totally 'get it'..I hope he brings you many years of inspiration and your pride and caring is obvious through those lines (Report) Reply

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  • Clarence Prince Clarence Prince (2/13/2016 12:28:00 PM)

    These are most encouraging words from a Dad to His Son
    Showing much love and appreciation. (Report) Reply

  • Ernest Makuakua Ernest Makuakua (1/4/2016 8:32:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem and i hope he stays bringing out the best in him
    thanks for sharing keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (12/29/2015 12:42:00 PM)

    my son, your ability to love, your talents, your future, your thoughts. let it not go in vain. remain true to your call to be a loving being. thank you for the wonderful thoughts. tony (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (11/28/2015 9:56:00 PM)

    Verily, a very loving, caring, adoring, advising,
    inspiring poem.

    Loved reading and commenting.
    Added to my favorite list......10 (Report) Reply

  • Charity Nduhiu Charity Nduhiu (7/23/2015 8:27:00 AM)

    Wow what a loving father you are! ! ! Keep blessing your son. I have really liked the poem Aufie (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (11/14/2014 8:01:00 AM)

    Great write from a loving father to a faithful son. What a great blessing to have a son who you can praise - right from your heart! Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (11/14/2014 8:00:00 AM)

    Great write from a loving father to a faithful son. What a great blessing to have a son who you can praise - right from your heart! Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (10/24/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    As what every father would say...... to every son! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (9/1/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    An adorable write! The message it gives, supercedes its poetic beauty! Each parent should be able to count one by one and speak aloud before their children their strengths! (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Honeytip Ruby Honeytip (7/7/2013 1:24:00 PM)

    Reinforcing the good is never wrong [3 Even better when it comes from the heart. Lovely Roobs x (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (6/23/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    beautiful thoughts of your son. so warm and delightful. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (5/24/2013 4:44:00 AM)

    really a good take for your son.. i had a son of 7 years.. i love him very much as you love yrs.. love the poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Owain Glyn (12/17/2012 2:03:00 PM)

    Could love be any greater? Good for you! (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (11/19/2012 3:39:00 AM)

    you really have poured forth the soul of a father in all chaste and pure colors of emotions while composing this apostrophe to your's simple though deep and very effective! i hope he must be proud of his status as your son! (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/17/2012 7:17:00 AM)

    Oh so heartwarmin frm father to son! Excellent rhymin too. So sweet sincere as a poem. Make him read it poet. (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (9/24/2012 10:20:00 PM)

    Your son should be proud to have such a doting father.May the relationship thrive and your young son rise to great heights.My best wishes to father and son.I liked the poem so much.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Walterrean Salley (5/29/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem. Just great! A proud Papa expressing boundless love for his dear son. May your bond be inseparable, and your son continues be pleasing to his loving, caring and doting father. My best to you Hans. 10 (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal Jinal Oswal (3/28/2012 8:57:00 AM)

    It is so important for a child to have parents who understand them in these changing times where one cannot trust any one... and especially the child needs dad(according to me) ... I love the way you understand him.. appreciate him... he is a lucky boy, indeed Papa's boy... I wish all the parents here read this and understand how important it is to to think about the child in this manner.. Thank you Sir, thank you very much! ! (Report) Reply

  • Annabel Cruz (2/23/2012 9:37:00 PM)

    There is nothing sweeter and more pure than one's love for one's children. This is truly heartfelt and sincere......I love the honesty of feeling behind it, and isn't that what poetry is all about after have mastered that! I have several poems on my page about my daughters and they are among my favorites for that very reason....I feel I am at my most sincere and open when I write about them. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 11, 2013

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