In Distress When Birds Call Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

In Distress When Birds Call

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Strange it seems to us not the least
Whilst watching their withering worlds,
Why few wings survive in our midst,
Why watchers see less and less birds.

If blue caps of rock thrush we miss,
Whistling calls of drongos1 so sweet,
Paints on parakeets, avian bliss,
We've been found wanting, less discreet.

The house sparrows—all-season friends,
The pairs of busy brownish wings,
Who come close to our culprits' hands,
Have dwindled, yet, mobile more rings.

And where has the pied bush-chat gone?
To Indian magpies, robins' ways;
Cuckoos, sunbirds, thrushes sing ‘lone,
And seen are but on lucky days.

Her haven on earth all but died,
Whence would paradise fly-catchers come?
Whilst food to flies is still supplied,
Gone has her fondest breakfast worm.

Yet, pesticides kill aplenty,
Far fewer green spaces we spare.
In zest for an exotic tree,
Natives we grow, nor for grown care.

Tall towers soar where fields, leas were,
Lakes if not levelled, are dug deep,
Shallow jheels2, life of wings in air;
No more than what we sow, we reap.

Birds that were once a visual feast—
A gang of crows chasing away
A large kite, brave li'le flying beast,
Only droves of doves now drool all day—
The sole heritage we deserve,
Watching birds' fine, do we them love?
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Drongos1: A local bird of the size of a bush thrush, greyish dark, with a tail like an inverted Y.
Jheels2: In shallow lakes birds can fish for food.
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Happenings | 01.11.12 |
Topic: birds, nature

Thursday, January 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There are pockets of bird watchers and green lovers, but birds are depleting by the day with their habitats in danger in the face of so-called civilization.

This poem is a revised version of ‘When Birds In Distress Call',
That received the following feedback:
Edward Kofi Louis(3/7/2019 1: 25: 00 PM)
It sounds the least! ! !

Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply
Aniruddha Pathak(3/7/2019 10: 18: 00 PM)
Thank you Edward Louis for answering the distress call of birds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 January 2020

A very keen observation on what is happening with our environment. A beautiful poem filled with kindness and insight. It expresses in brilliant detail how men destroy the habitats of birds and other living things. Brilliantly penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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