In My Dreams Poem by danielle bennett

In My Dreams



when I was younger
I always used to dream of you
although I didn't know you yet
in my dreams it would show it all
everything that would happen in the future
and all the pain I was going to put you through
I had seen it all and nothing changed
it all went in the same order i saw it in
even then I thought you would be the one
and out of it all I was right
you really were the right one for me
you've helped me through a lot
and you always cared for me
seeing it all when I was younger
always had me thinking what could happen
if I were to change what was ment to be done
changing it right now wouldn't do any good for me though
i'll just keep it the way it is and see were it goes from there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
silver phoenix 01 August 2008

well done, keep it up! 8/10! very well done Please check my work out too if you have some time. Thank you, Kilian

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