In Surrealism Poem by Satish Verma

In Surrealism

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My inguinal pain,
watching mating of moons,
at bank of tears.

Would you come to
ask the sun not to throw the
sparks in the eyes.

Will wait in twilight
for the blueness in moon.
Then give a call.

Monday, March 4, 2019
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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 March 2019

A magnificent poetic expression, Satish.....10+++++++++++++

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Julia Luber 04 March 2019

timing his moves according to the moon's temperament- very poetic

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