Insidious Poem by Wandering Biku

Insidious

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Negativity is not always overtly depressive,
Positivity is not always overtly happy.

Negativity eats away, piece by piece.
It hides in the banal.
Its disguised by layers of colour,
Noise, applause.

Negativity is drip fed, unnoticed.
The bland
The ordinary
The acceptable
Even the comfortable.

Negativity keeps you in your place,
Convinces you
How good you've got it,
Fosters no hope,
Breeds joy in superficiality.

Negativity is not a natural state of mind.
No one wants it, yet
Its continually perpetuated by those
Who are blind to it.

Negativity tells you that Positivity is frivolous and childish,
Happy-clappy psycho-babble,
Is an immense effort, an uphill struggle,
A dream, stupid, deluded, unobtainable…
Well, it would, wouldn't it? Its Negative.

Negativity sets you unattainable goals,
Holds up a false mirror,
Tells you that you need to be
What you can't be…

But still you ache, drive, strive
To get there,
Concentrating all energy on it,
To the detriment of all else.

Tuesday, July 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: mental illness,social comment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A commentary on the pervaisive nature of negativity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 July 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation written in persuasive expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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