IT CAN BE SAID
esspeecee…16.04.09.
It can be said
To her
In fountaining
Rainy dusk to
Douse her mind.
It can be said to her
In glowing desert
After rain
Burnished azured sky
To say
No mind watching us.
It can be said to her
We’re no body
No speech
Only salvos of stupidity
To share between us.
It can be said to her
To be in together in dark of
Inverted saucer
To find stealth
Under the just born dusk sky.
It can be said to her
Matters little
What others call or say
Those reach us not.
It can be said to her
All are futile to say
As there is nothing to say
We’re in us
Not in our own me.
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Nice poem where poet has given many ways. '...To be in together in dark of // Inverted saucer // To find stealth // Under the just born dusk sky….' Excellent imagination portrayed.
Finest emotion for overwhelmingly intimate togetherness. Ten ++ for colorful finish. PO PO
So many things Poet said in the form of ‘It Can Be Said’. Finally wonderful conclusion vide infra - It can be said to her All are futile to say As there is nothing to say We’re in us Not in our own me. Ten+++ WR
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
‘…We’re in us // Not in our own me…’ Wonderful lines! Very softly composed and appealing.