It Never Fails Poem by Heaven Ludy

It Never Fails

Rating: 4.5


A lie never fails
To peak out from its hiding place
Revealing all of its secrets to the world
A lie never fails
To betray the one
They thought they were protecting
A lie never fails
To grow and grow
Until it bursts into the truth
A lie never fails
To fail you
And reveal the 'innocent' lier...
You

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 06 June 2008

I must say, that I much approve of your design of this poem as a paragraph. I read so many writings that are really not poems but prose. I don't know why they just don't use the prose paragraph construction that you did. I'm giving you an extra point, just for that alone. I much approve your topic and the way you communicated it. Thanks for doing so. GW62

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