That's it!
No more excuses!
I'm laying down some rules!
Just so you don't misunderstand...
I'm tired of you fools!
It's time for me to get tough!
No more ''Oh, that's ok.''
I've had all I can take from you
And things will change...
TODAY!
I mean it.
I'm not kidding!
You'll be begging for a break!
No matter how much you may beg
That's it...for heavens sake!
What's that?
A tear?
Don't do it.....I said I'm being tough!
Now you want a hug from me?
I guess you've suffered enough!
:)
Ooh, you tyrant you! ! Definitely has the 'ring of truth' about it, Mary - loved it. Jon.
This is adorable. I'll bet they've got the waterworks down to an artform.
I DONT HAVE KIDS MYSELF (IM GUESSING THATS YOUR MAIN TARGET FOR THIS POEM) BUT I KNOW WHERE YOUR COMING FROM. GOOD POEM IAN
To see beyond the lesson and beyond the words, then to show the compassion.Yes, i'd say you were a good writer.Love Duncan
She's REally annoyed! ... I'll have to do the tears thing... nice write, Mary, and neat rhyming...
We're not as tough as we think we are Mary! ! ! ! ! We're pretty soft underneath! Nice write. Love Ernestine XXX
You can't help it when that little lip starts trembling...nice write Mary!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
10 from Tiyler, super nice and very true...