Jennifer (Eyes If Bright) Poem by neil derek singleton

Jennifer (Eyes If Bright)



the rose off summer grows and grows the windy rain blows and flows.
the earth is falling. wakeing up sad every morning.. but with you it isn't like that at all. wakeing up looking into your eyes is heaven on earth. your a falling angel i once catched and lift you up on you feet. because off you my life is complet. help me when i am up or down. help me when noone eles is around. my love for you grows and is proud. i wouldn't be alive if you never came to my life.. so i thank you so much for your eyes for giveing me light.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ro'ya Abdulaal 30 November 2009

Great use of rhythm, well chosen words and a smooth flow of sensations, well done

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