Jim* Poem by Pete O'H

Jim*

Rating: 4.0


jim..............was...........happy......and
lived...........home........with..........wife &
with............all..............his............children;
himself? ...alone? .....never! ......he
hated.........having..to.end(ing) ..plays:
kids, .........family, ..... fun............Jim
always.......hated........being.......alone
yelling........jim.............never.......was;
at...............peace.......with..........all
the.............world; ; ; ; any...........time,
strangers, they're.......friends! ! alone
jim.............never.........wanted....to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 20 August 2006

wow, you've got a fantastic mind to hink that up! ! ! gr8

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Goldy Locks 28 May 2006

i get it, clever, it's all about direction. Sus.

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