Just Show Me The Way. Poem by ONY ME.

Just Show Me The Way.

Rating: 5.0


Im feeling like
my life's stood still.
everything's a struggle
and all up hill.

No moving forward
not even a goal,
am i destined to be
a lonely, lost soul?

Is there light at the end of the tunnel?
Will this dog ever have it's day?
or will i just go through life
never knowing the way?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Eaglesfield 09 December 2008

Every dog has it's day.Yours may be through great poetry.Kev

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Ronald Brissette 22 October 2007

life is not fair, one who does not have a goal is a lost soul in deed. You must have some goal if nothing but to clean the house. Everything we do has a beginning and and end, the end is the goal. In the matters of love the goal sometimes is not clear or even may fad away from time to time but yet the goal is still there waiting for us to complete it. A person without a goal is standing still. Very nice and strong poem Ony my British Love.

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poetry lover 21 October 2007

A poor lost soul you are & look to god to show you the way.

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