(landscapes Collection) Seascape, Dorking Poem by Janice Windle

(landscapes Collection) Seascape, Dorking



In the valley near Dorking
treetops cluster like broccoli heads.
They are not the fresh green
of a child’s coloured landscape
but browns, pinks, khaki,
mustard and the soft greys
of a colony of corals.
The kestrels float, like predatory fish
looking for the quiver of a dying morsel
on the road ribboning beside the river
that created the valley.

The bruised clouds above
are lying on the surface of this sea;
above them, the true sky, blue air
but we are down here, in our diving bell,
driving through the autumn rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 29 November 2009

Very descriptive and written from an artists perspective. I like the way you describe all the differing colours...... Ruthie

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