(01 may 1962 / U.S.A.)

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Latent Leaving

Life touches both shores
That lap at the isthmus of living;
Water before
Water after
Water evermore -
We walk
The penninsula of life
From one end to the other
Afraid of getting wet,
Never realizing how much we'd love to swim -
Yet at the very end
We shall all wade in
Discovering the deeper we go...
We become the water,
We are the flow -
Turning with one last gaze before we part
We reach out to the sandy shore
Writing 'Goodbye' upon the beach of time,
Forever there, next to the name
We leave behind -

Submitted: Tuesday, July 17, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, July 18, 2012


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  • Heather Wilson (7/19/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    A fantastic description of a journey through life, `Writing Goodbye on the beach of time` a wonderful poem..

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  • Charles James (7/18/2012 10:22:00 PM)

    I can picture your words here, like a little one act play! ! Truly inspired writing! ! Bravo!

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  • Valerie Dohren (7/18/2012 3:09:00 PM)

    Brilliant poem Smoky, wise and wonderful words.

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  • Juan Olivarez (7/18/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    Smoky this is one deep poem, we all will take the plunge one day it is so written great poem.

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  • Diane Hine (7/18/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    Wonderful image, very peaceful and well-written.

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  • Eric Cockrell (7/17/2012 7:47:00 PM)

    and the new name we find.... absolutely love this one!

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