Laughing Pain Poem by Kayla Garner

Laughing Pain



I'm sitting, crying.
You don't even care as I lie in my puddle of sadness.
The puddle was caused by you,
The tears streaming down my cheeks, from you as well.
And all you do is sit and laugh.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K. Bianca 02 July 2010

I like the phrase 'puddle of sadness'. It sounds really... sad. Good contrast between first and last line.

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