Law Abiding (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Law Abiding (Senryu)



this black limousine
transporting a teak coffin
stops to pay the toll

© 2016

Friday, August 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ajit Kumar 12 August 2016

Another terrific write. Waiting for more to read.

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Gil Highlander 12 August 2016

superb juxtaposition in this senryu.

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Yuko Onishi 12 August 2016

Just one word: Beautiful!

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