Leftover Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi
Leftover
What will it be like without you?
Some days, I want to know
Others, I can't stand the thought
Just the same as eveything dies
I'll just be left alone
A leftover
Because I couldn't control
My temper
That expressed the torture of regret better than I've read it done in a long time. Totally agree with Richard below.5 starred this of course
Sadly but perfectly described! We feel the pain and the massive regret!
I like how you have expressed the feeling of regret in this succinct gem of a piece. The impact is powerful.
The sadness and regret evoked in these lines, are keenly felt through vivid images.5 stars.
The agony of loneliness has honestly been dealt with poetically
Top score for this awesome poem. I can feel the depth of regret and loneliness, dear Poetess.
Dear LeeAnn, what i love about your poem is the absolute honesty and stark reality that fills one's heart with overwhelming emotion.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 9:45:00 AM # 1.0.0.1119
In succinct fashion, you've managed to brilliantly convey the tragedy of losing a friend...and the brutal loneliness that follows. And you end it with such deep honesty. An absolutely stunning poem, LeeAnn!