Legacies Of A Past Best Forgotten: - 04: The Bleeding Moment Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Legacies Of A Past Best Forgotten: - 04: The Bleeding Moment

Rating: 4.9


Some days ago, and
only sometimes back
we had been friends
committed to court between
our passionate hearts,
our desires: blue and deep,
our feelings: intense and rich,
our beings: longing and sick
of each other, till-

The thin line of separation
that bleeding moment of tragedy
carved enough of space
between our longing,
fusing hearts.

Legacies Of A Past Best Forgotten: - 04: The Bleeding Moment
Tuesday, December 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: timeless,desire,forgotten love,longing,nostalgia
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 16 December 2017

carved enough of space between our longing, fusing hearts. A very touching song of love. Liked it. 10

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Paresh Chakra 16 December 2017

The thin line of separation that bleeding moment of tragedy carved enough of space between our longing, fusing hearts. Lovely poem shared with us. 10

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Anuranjita Ghadei 13 December 2017

The thin line of separation that bleeding moment of tragedy carved enough of space between our longing, fusing hearts. A very touching song of love. Liked it. 10++++ Fiza

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Anuranjita Ghadei 13 December 2017

The thin line of separation that bleeding moment of tragedy carved enough of space between our longing, fusing hearts. A very touching song of love. Liked it.

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Rini Shibu 12 December 2017

A touching poem on bleeding moments of separation.. Well written

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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