Let Love Spread Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Let Love Spread

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Hatred smites too often
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shaking our faith in mankind
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We raise our hands to Heavens
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for peace and love to descend
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But there's more to be done
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There's a need for love to grow
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its roots deep within our souls
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Let love spread its branches
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to displace bigotry and intolerance.

Wednesday, June 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,peace,tolerance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For the victims of Orlando shootings and for the whole suffering humanity that is victim of hatred and intolerance.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 15 June 2016

Beautiful penning, wonderful thoughts, totally agree! May love grow and spread!

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Nosheen Irfan 15 June 2016

Thanku so much Elena for reading n appreciating.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2021

A brilliant poem...liked the humble expression!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

There's a need for love to grow! Nice piece of work.

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Edmund Strolis 17 June 2016

There is a certain prejudice when lives are lost in a sensational fashion and therefore publicized because the media has a story.400,000 Syrians have died because of the empty suit leader in America that stood by and allowed this to happen as he abandoned Iraq. Leaving a vacuum filled now by savage sub-human beings. This business of shining a light on an event because it fits a narrative is for the small minds easily led. South Africa is now by far worse than ever with rapes and murder and injustice but the Hollywood stars do not care because it is black on black crime and corruption and yet all blood is red. Terrorism is met with indifference until certain people die and then sadness sets in. I should hope that I never become so blind. Your poem should be for humanity. The people of Paris and Orlando gain attention but not the people of Fallujah or the daily dead in the streets of Chicago.

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Nosheen Irfan 18 June 2016

I dont mind constructive criticism at all Edmund. Your observations are quite right n im glad you made these objective comments. Our concern is all mankind regardless of race, religion or nationality.

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Edmund Strolis 18 June 2016

I hope you understand that I did not mean this as a criticism of you at all. I wrote poems myself when Paris was attacked. We in America are watching our nation implode and political correctness is its death rattle......................your poem is an eloquent prayer for peace at a time when we need it the most. Written without dramatics. Neither over or understated. Your voice must be heard. Beautiful.

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Nosheen Irfan 17 June 2016

Thanku Edmund for your wise remarks. This poem is for all humanity written in the context of a particular incident.

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M Asim Nehal 17 June 2016

Aameen......Masha Allah...let them all come to the straight path and follow it with love and mutual respect even with so many differences. Loved it...100+++

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Kelly Kurt 15 June 2016

For all of humankind to continue existing, we must learn to love everyone equally

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