Let Me Go Poem by sara taira

Let Me Go

Rating: 4.0


i have been here for too long.
i am traped inside.
and can't find my way out.
i try to scream.
but nothing comes out.
it is choking me.
the other me is trying to kill me.
how sad.
i like this me.
don't want to change.
and give in to darkness.
'let me go'
but its hold starts to hurt.
let me go
let me go
i am no use.
but still i want to live.
how sad...
but if i was going to die.
make it quiet
and painless.
now i see it.
the way out.
the door way to death
is my only way out
and i go.
and end up in hell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sidney Hall 23 July 2011

A very moving poem Sara. I can feel the struggle for freedom to express oneself but the worlds boarders of what they deem to call reality preventing you from accumplishing it. Well written.

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