Letter To A Teacher Poem by safari mupe

Dear teacher,

Sometimes I sit and wonder,
Sometimes words cross inside my head,
Sometimes I sit and think about scripture
But the difficult thing is to go with ahead.
And try to write on paper what you were thinking to.
It's not difficult to do.
But I don't know how to begin the script!
Maybe, at the end, I'll do it.

If you have time, you can look over this letter,
Inside every line.
To write an idea in four, six or nine
Verses, I assure it's not easy to a writer.
But I'll try.
Even if I have to look the sky, I'm a guy!

If you look inside this letter,
Teacher!
It's not a simple letter but a poem.
I took all my time to write my rime.

Really, it's looking as a letter
Because I began by "Dear"
But that wasn't my intention.
I wanted to write something about my life, my ambition.

There are many mistakes inside,
I know!
But what's requested now
Is to correct those founded.
Try to write in red,
It's what I need indeed.
But do not erase.
Please!
If all the line is wrong,
Write, under the wrong, the strong.

If there is a nonsense line
Please, look at the end and try to add a rime
But do not erase
Add only in red. It will raise.

I tried to insert some kinds of rhyme'
But I don't know, I did it in mine (means my way)
I know that in French there are many kinds of rhymes, really!
But in English, I don't know exactly.

Have a look in each verse.
They are written in 4,6 and 8 lines. Enough!
Is that tolerable, agreeable,
Or rejectable.


I think there aren't difficult words
Because I wrote it without d's (dictionaries)
I was alone,
Trying to find difficult words but none!
So I wrote as I planne. (planned)
As you'll see, first with pen.
The computer came after.
So, that was it! Teacher!

I was thinking about a rescue
Then you enter in the queue.
I think you'll help me to improve my writing
In such a kind of boring.

I don't know many things about English philosophy
But I'll translate first what I knew in French in English. Really!
I can assure you that it's the beginning.
Ha! ha! ha! I'm joking!

I don't know if I arrived
But I know time was cached.

Please teacher!
Try to correct this letter.
It will help me.
Not only my improving opportunity
Also my destiny.

I hope you understand mi' (mine, just to say my idea)
First stand by!