Life Poem by Aria Ratering

Life



today, tomarrow, tonight. thats when we will talk.today, tomarrow, tonight.thats when the fun begins. this used to be a meet at the park. but i have turned it into a meet made in hell.haha. living, overrated, loving, just a myth, walking, annoying. the day will come when we dont need a heart and love is just a word and we wont have to walk just hover.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2009

It sounds like the writer has had enough of whatever it is this relationship has become. A sense of humor cannot disguise the contempt for what presently is the case. She is prepared to cast it aside. The words are very creative and interesting to contemplate. A fine writing indeed. Well done. GW62

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