* Life Given As Debt - Senryu Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* Life Given As Debt - Senryu

Rating: 2.5


the body has lost
over and over in debt
to the life given

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

A dazzling work will deep sense.10+++

0 0 Reply
Kranthi Pothineni 01 June 2009

A deep thought in senryu format is really good.

0 0 Reply
Tsira Goge 01 June 2009

It's small lines carry the deep thoughts... good ..10.. Tsira

0 0 Reply
Louis Rams 31 May 2009

true to sight, debts might

0 0 Reply
Sandra Martyres 30 May 2009

A provocative observation Samanyan...

0 0 Reply
Rajaram Ramachandran 30 May 2009

True, over and over in debt, the life ends in perpetural misery.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success