Life Is A Story Poem by Manahil Shafiq

Life Is A Story

Rating: 2.7


life is a weak flame
that burns in the winter lamp
scared to be blown off
by strong winds for by men

life is evil
it kills he who uses it
and abandon those who enjoys it
it laughs on those who ends it
and those who waste it

life is an intertesting story
which starts perfectly
goes on quickly
and ends finally
u read it and enjoy it
but pity on the ending

but being busy with your life
u soon forget that story
and one day yours itself
leaves a beginning and an end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G. Murdock 26 February 2010

I can viscerally relate to this portrait, as in the portrait of an artist as a young man by Joyce. It is parochial in form and yet maintains the ascetic distance from preaching. This summation is more pathos than cynical but you have somehow captured the fraility of existence and the existential notion of being only to be. That is all we are sparked for, (from your opening verse) like a grass fire we are ignited by one another and like vessels pour ourselves from one to the other and like the sea we drown one another in our miseries. But all the while we are islands unto ourselves.

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Manahil Shafiq

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Pakistan (Islamabad)
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