Life’s Choices Poem by Charl JF Cilliers

Life’s Choices

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Life’s choices
never made

trinkets hoarded
seldom looked at again

always new, polished
as promises,
next season’s rain

silent as the memory
of a long-departed train.

Sunday, November 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: metaphysical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2015

silent as the memory of a long-departed train...Metaphysically wonderful expression definitely. Wise poem shared definitely.10

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Charl Cilliers 09 November 2015

Thank you for your kind words, Kumarmani!

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Charl JF Cilliers

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Cape Town, South Africa
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